1.28.2012

Low Tide

At night, when there is a full moon on the bay and it's low tide, I often look out on this view and can see  the mud flats and where the channel runs for the boats to navigate out to sea. There is something about seeing this scene in the moonlight that makes it more appealing to paint than in the cold light of day. When I took it to class my instructor thought the white area in the sky competed too much with the reflection in the water. Maybe he is right and the sky area shouldn't have been so pure. I think also that this should have been painted on cold pressed paper to better reflect lights on the water.  I painted this watercolor on hot-pressed paper (9.5" x 7.75") using French ultramarine, Payne's grey and burnt sienna.

9 comments:

  1. Jean, I rather like it the way it is. Why not try another version on CP and see what the differences are?

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  2. I just don't know Jean...the light in the sky really attracted me!...IF and only IF you decide to tone anything down...just do a tiny bit of water I'd say...such a beautiful piece!!

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  3. I like the way you brought out the light in the sky..I am eager to see the changes you might want to make as well.. comparisons teach us a lot!

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  4. Your teacher could be right Jean, but it's a splendid piece as it is.

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  5. The light really caught my attention, I think it is a lovely piece, how wonderful to just look out of your window and have a view like this.

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  6. It looks pretty right to me Jean. Either the sky or the water needs to be stronger if you tone down the bright light in the sky it may become too close to the value of the water. Maybe he meant you needed to only touch it down very slightly with a single wash perhaps. I think this is a real beauty and you have captured the mood of the time of day perfectly. As Maggie suggested do another one and compare the differences.

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  7. oh jean ..beautiful ..i love how you've depicted the mud flats in the fg ..i like the sky and brightness as it is .

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