
I took the watercolor below to my weekly class Thursday for critique. Jerry Stitt has a sign above where he posts our art that says, "how can I make this a better painting" - a very informative part of the lesson. Jerry advised the above crop which does away with some of the lower hill. I think he was spot on. He also suggested a cool glaze over the bright sienna forefront to tone it down and not make it so prominent that it draws your eye to that area. I agree on that too, but I've messed up so many watercolors thinking I could improve on them, that I am going to leave that alone. I'll remember the advice and use it in my next low key painting. I thought I would show the before and after to see what everyone else thinks.
It's been a while since I posted last but now I'm back. Thanks everyone who asked after me. I took some time off over the summer to spend with family. I also went through a serious painting block - which stemmed from not being able to put onto paper what I wanted to achieve. So I signed up for classes with Master watercolorist, Jerry Stitt, AWS. I am learning a lot from him about how to be more loose when painting. It's a four-hour class once a week in which he critiques one of your paintings and then does a demonstration watercolor. He has a nice loose style, and watching him paint has helped me a lot in achieving my goal of abstract impressionism. I'm also learning to paint larger pieces using larger brushes - which helps with the looseness. I never did get the abstract thing out of my system. I hope you like this early attempt.








